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Hi there, Cgirl! I like what you've done with this piece since the last time I saw it. :) You've expanded it, and added a little more detail. :D I'm ...

Hi there, cgirl! I'm finally here to review. Heh, heh...*sheepish face* This was cute! Your characters are all quirky and entertaining, and your writing is fairly well-organized. Grammar, sentence str

Hi there, Judy! Sorry it took me forever to get back to you on this. *slaps self* Bad mentor I can't quite gather my thoughts on this piece. I apologize ...

Hey, cgirl! I think you have an interesting start here. Obviously you have plenty of room for plot and character development, but that's the fun part! :D Personally, I don't ...

Hey there, IamOne! Sorry I've been so lame about responding to your review request in a timely manner. You've gotten some really good feedback from my fellow reviewers, so I'll ...

Hey, Yuka! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you on this. Better late than never, right? Right? Okay. I like the concept of this piece. You ...

Hey there! Sea here with your review. :D What a lovely start you have here! There are some absolutely wonderful lines in there. Some of your word paintings are very ...

Hi there, Unconsoled! Sea here as requested. :D You have a very pleasing writing style; the words all flow together, and not a single sentence caught my eye as having ...

Hey there, SarahDoubleA! First of all, welcome to YWS! :elephant: Now, on to the review. :D Your writing flows nicely, and you have a nice mix of syntax structure. Yay! ...

Hi there, IceBerry! First of all, a huge welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying it so far. :) You have a nice start here. I think all of your ideas ...

Hey there, Thespiman! Okay, so...I read this a really long time ago. Probably back in October of last year. But I couldn't really review it because (yes, I am ashamed) ...

Hey there, wordsandwishes! Sea here to review. :) I really enjoyed this. You have some nice images going on, and I understood your ideas without them being thrust into my ...

Hi there! :smt039 Like Carbon, I had no idea what this was about, but it didn't really matter. I don't think the reader needs to know precisely what events are ...

Hello again, therealme! What a chipper little piece. Sure it was a little cliché, but it made me smile nonetheless. :) I loved the little boy. So typical. ;) Now ...

Hi Nike! Sea here to review. :D Sorry to drag up one of your pieces from the archives, but I think it's worth it. ;) I like the writing style ...